Being new to the ways of typography, I'm not sure how my critique would do or if it would hold any ground. However, I think the only change I would make, is many a different font style for the actual name? I like how the letters are blocky, and easy to read. I also like how it appears to all be made up of "I"s. As I said I'm still learning how to do anything involving typography. This by far being one of the best examples I've seen, and definitely something to try and work towards as I grow. Thank you!
“There are two basic motivating forces: fear and love. When we are afraid, we pull back from life. When we are in love, we open to all that life has to offer with passion, excitement, and acceptance. We need to learn to love ourselves first, in all our glory and our imperfections. If we cannot love ourselves, we cannot fully open to our ability to love others or our potential to create. Evolution and all hopes for a better world rest in the fearlessness and open-hearted vision of people who embrace life.” ― John Lennon
My apology for it being a bit wordy. I love John Lennon and this is by far one of the greatest things I've seen. Absolutely stunning.
Hi! It's really impressive what you did, it looks so real and natural. Did you do it based on a pic? I just love it!
Well, I don't know how to ask this, but anyway. Could you send me a copy without the deviantart's water mark? I know that is too much to ask, but I want to make an wallpaper to my boyfriend and this image is perfect for it. If you want to I can send you the result and you can publish as yours. I won't make too many changes anyway.
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